Lenise

Lost in dreams,

I dare not, awaken

lest I forgot, the memory,

of true life, lived

3 thoughts on “”

Jay Bleu says:

May 18, 2020 at 3:33 pm

The placement of the comma changes everything

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1. iamlenise says:
  
  May 18, 2020 at 3:56 pm
  
  ..art imitating life..
  
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  1. Jay Bleu says:
    
    May 18, 2020 at 4:03 pm
    
    Yes. . .

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